[附件]林XX的CA系統(tǒng)大學申請文書——第五題.docx

　　項目狀態(tài)：已通過審核

　　文書老師：傅XX

　　文書內容：由學生撰寫（已由文書老師編輯）

　　——————————————————————

　　描述你所面臨的最重大的挑戰(zhàn)，以及你為克服這一挑戰(zhàn)所采取的步驟。這個挑戰(zhàn)對你的學業(yè)成績有何影響？

　　在我年幼時，我曾經遭遇過一場重大的車禍，全身上下數十處粉碎性骨折。我成功地在醫(yī)生與父母的幫助下回復了行動能力，代價是我身體的發(fā)育遲緩，以及我的骨骼內仍舊殘留著數處手術時留下的金屬植入。

　　但是，這場車禍給我?guī)淼奶魬?zhàn)，不光光是經歷了幾十個小時的搶救手術，也不光光是在這之后漫長而又痛苦的康復訓練。那是比身體創(chuàng)傷更可怕的東西——一場折磨了我超過兩年的校園欺凌。

　　就像我在上邊提到的那樣，我的身體發(fā)育因為車禍的影響而受到了嚴重的影響，直到我高中入學，我的身高還不到一百五十公分，比那些同齡人矮了太多太多。我想，這或許就是我的那群高中同學霸凌我的契機，因為我總能聽見他們用“矮子”、“侏儒”等侮辱性的詞匯來稱呼我。甚至，他們給我取了一個冒犯性十足的綽號，“一米五”，因為我的身高連一米五都不到。

　　我總能發(fā)現我課桌上的筆袋不翼而飛——那是，那些“調皮”的男生故意將它們放在了高高的書架上，我無法徒手觸碰到的地方。我曾向班里的女生求助，只是她們從未向我伸出過援手。我只能將我的椅子搬來，小心翼翼地站上去，來拿到我的筆袋。每當這時，我都能聽到背后傳來刺耳而傷人的嗤笑。

　　我為此哭泣過好多次，我的成績也因此一落千丈。不過所幸的是，那些人所做過的最惡毒的事情就只有言語上的辱罵，人格上的侮辱，并沒有對我使用過暴力。

　　我天真地認為，是我的身高令他們瞧不起我。因此，我想盡了一切辦法來提高我的身高。我按照醫(yī)生的指導，進行了科學的鍛煉，搭配合理的飲食，還有充足的睡眠。我的生長激素分泌終于成功地回到了正常人的水平，我的身高也在奇跡般地來到了一百六十公分。

　　“我終于不再是那個曾經被他們嘲笑的矮子了！”

　　這會是我最愚蠢的想法，他們對我的欺辱并不會因為我長高了而停止，因為我最終發(fā)現，他們只是單純地需要一個出氣的對象罷了。曾經班里有個女生忘帶耳機，著急做托福聽力練習。我好心地將我的耳機遞了過去，但她卻鄙夷地推開了我的手，并且對我說道：“你的耳機上沾滿了耳屎，不要遞過來！”

　　從那以后我徹底地改變了我的想法，我深刻地意識到，我是無法改變這群人的想法的，就像我永遠叫不醒一個裝睡的人。

　　“為什么我需要在意他們對我的看法呢？”我這樣想道，于是將他們對我的侮辱當作了耳旁風，倘若他們對我做了哪些惡劣的惡作劇，我也只會將這件事情報告給老師，不會像以前那樣哭紅著眼睛和他們爭執(zhí)。

　　我開始為自己而活。在拋棄了那些不必要的想法之后，我發(fā)現我終于能夠專心于我的學業(yè)上了。我的成績突飛猛進，一路高歌猛進到了年級第一。我參加了各種各樣的學術競賽，并且我的文章被成功地發(fā)表在了一些著名的青少年期刊上。我的身體狀況也在一天天地好轉，那些車禍帶給我的傷害仿佛徹底不復存在了一般。

　　我開始結交起了朋友，當然不是我的同班同學，而是在那些學術研討會上，數學競賽上認識的興趣相投的朋友。我的人生在這之后變得豐富多彩，變得充實，盡管班里的那群人還在孤立著我，不愿意與我說話，但我卻認為，是我孤立了他們，因為他們在我的世界里并不重要。

　　我認為我成功地通過了這個折磨了我兩年多的挑戰(zhàn)。我克服了我心中的障礙，并且走出了校園欺凌的陰影。這兩年的時光讓我明白了一個道理，那些殺不死我的只會讓我更加強大。

　　以下為英文原件：

　　Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?

　　When I was a child， I suffered a major car accident， which resulted comminuted fractures all over my body. I fortunately restored my mobility with the help of surgeon and my parents. At the cost， my growth slows down， and several metal implants remained in my bones.

　　However， the most significant challenge brought to me by the car accident is not the rescue operation for hours， nor the long-term and painful rehabilitation training thereafter. It was something more terrible than physical trauma —— a campus bullying that tortured me for more than two years.

　　As I mentioned above， my physical development has been seriously affected by the car accident. When I entered high school， my height was less than 4.9 feet， which was much shorter than my peers. This may be the turning point for my high school classmates to bully me， because I can always hear them call me with insulting words， such as “shorty“ and “dwarf“. Even， they gave me an offensive nickname，“4.9 feet“， because my height is less than 4.9 feet.

　　I could often find my pencil case missing——that was， those naughty boys deliberately put them on the high bookshelf， where I cannot touch with bare hands. I had asked girls for help， but they never reached out to me. I can only move my chair next to the bookshelf， stand on it carefully， and get my pencil case. Whenever so， I can hear the sneer coming from behind， harsh and hurtful.

　　I cried for this many times， and my grades plummeted. However， fortunately， the most vicious thing those people have ever done are verbal abuse and personal insult， with no violence against me.

　　My idea was na?ve —— it was my height that made them look down on me. Therefore， I tried my best to increase my height. With doctor's guidance， I had scientific exercise， reasonable diet， and enough sleep. My growth hormone secretion finally successfully returned to the normal level， and my height miraculously reached 5.25 feet.

　　“I am finally no longer the dwarf who was laughed at by them!“

　　This would be my stupidest idea， and their insult to me had never stopped. I finally found out that they just need a “punching bag“. Once， there was a girl in the class who forgot to wear headphones and was anxious to do TOEFL listening practice. I kindly handed my earphones over， but she pushed my hand away with contempt， and said to me:“Your earphones are covered with earwax， don't pass them!“

　　Since then， I have completely changed my attitudes. I deeply realized that I could never change the minds of this group of people， while I can never wake up a person who pretends to sleep.

　　“Why do I have to care what they think of me?“ I thought， so I turned a deaf ear to their insult to me. If they did some bad tricks， I would only report it to the teacher and would not cry and argue with them as before.

　　I began to live for myself. After abandoning those unnecessary ideas， I found that I could finally concentrate on my studies. My grades improved by leaps and bounds， all the way to the first grade. I participated in various academic competitions， and my articles have been successfully published on some famous youth journals. My physical condition was also getting better. The injuries caused by the car accident seem to have completely disappeared.

　　I began to make friends with those who have similar interests in academic competitions. My life has become enriched and colorful after that. Although it seemed that my classmates were still isolating me and unwilling to talk to me， I hold the different point of view —— it should be me who isolated them. They are not necessary in my world.

　　The challenge that has tormented me for more than two years has been successfully overcome. I conquered the obstacles in my heart and walked out of the shadow of campus bullying. These two years have taught me a truth —— what doesn't kill you makes you stronger.